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Blood and Fire - Fire Pt 1

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Blood and Water
Fire: Part 1

Cast:
Canada: Robin Gurl
America: Miles
Britain: Robin Gurl
France: Miles

This is the gigantic thing that is still on going. xD Um..yeh. O.o xD haha. Enjoy this insanity. O.o Um we do torture Canada A LOT…and remember technically speaking this is only part 1 of a giant four parter. O.O yeh ..this first part was 45 pages before we cut it up into parts. PLEASE PLEASE Comment. We are DYING to know how we did.

Disclaimer: We own nothing but the idea.

America:  *grabs a log and tosses it on a wood pile then wiped his hands off on black leather work gloves stifling a cough * God it sure is awful Smokey out here.  *looks up at sky squinting his eyes *

Canada: * appears on the porch and comes out of the house with a tray that has drinks on it* Here, Alfred, Papa made raspberry lemonade again! *notices its hazy but thinks nothing of it at first *  Be careful lifting * Out of no where he starts coughing, at first annoyed more than anything because it won't stop* ..lifting those logs..*coughcough* in that heat. *Pants and takes one of the glasses and drinks some of it down just thinking his throat is dry.* ...sorry about that. But seriously, Alfred, don't over heat yourself!

America: *turns and gives his brother that stupid innocently cocky trade mark smile* Bahhh, don't worry 'bout me dude, there's no way a little heat's gunna do me in! *He points thumb at own chest confidently* But I am parched, *walks over and sits down on old wooden bench and takes glass* Thanks! Got any food too? *gulps down, getting more on face and down neck than in mouth*

Canada: America! Yuck, make sure to get it in your mouth. It's lemonade not water. Now you'll be all sticky. *makes a face and stifles some more coughs* ...it sure is hazy out here....hey what were you saying before I walked out? I heard a bit of it but Papa was yelling at Father again..

America: *looks over and blinks swallowing* *wipes mouth on arm handing glass back* I was just talking out loud *looks up sneezing* Gah! Stupid smoky air! Makes the inside of my nose i-it--ACHOOO!

Canada: Smokey...Air? *stands up straight and closes his eyes, letting the wind blow through his hair* ...it's not from Canada. Are your lands burning, America? *laughs* bless you. *coughs and winds up wheezing* ..this is *wheeze* crazy. It's hard to breathe out here, eh?

America: *sneezes again* Yeh...*rubs nose* just a few pete swamps on fire somewhere no biggy. Not like what happens down in California, brush fire thing.
But yes, *stands up coughing into red bandana round neck* it is smokey, making my eyes water *takes gasses and rubs eyes annoyed*

Canada: Are you sure it's not too bad? I read in the papers that they evacuated people who lived in Cali. *falls onto one of the stumps panting* ...*starts to notice he's really having a hard time breathing but tries to ignore it* So glad it's finally summer *wheeze* ..we should go *wheeze* to the pool...

America: *looks over* Yeh we should or go to your place and go swimming naked in Nigra falls again and scare the tourists like we did that one time *walks over and places hand on back* you ok bro? Sure are hacking alot

Canada:  Of ...Of course *coughing* ...w..why wouldn't I be? *panting* ..nigra falls..hehe...*cough* ...that was *cough* fun...can you *wheeze* hand me that other *wheeze* glass please?

America: *hands glass* here you go

Canada: *tries to drink but coughs and spews by accident* ..th..this sucks...*can't stop*

America: Canada?

Canada: *accidentally drops the glass to the ground and wraps arms around middle*..*wheeze* I..I can't *wheeze cough* breathe

America: *eyes widen* *bends down gently wrapping one arm around Canada* Easy bro, take it easy you're *cough* starting to scare me* when Canada doesn't stop, thread's one of his arms over shoulder and holds him up* Come on dude lets get you inside before you keel over on me

Canada: *tries to walk but knees buckle and he keeps coughing, most of them hoarse* sor...sorry...I don't understand...what's ...what's wrong

America: *picks up and throws across shoulders and lifts up onto feet* Its ok Matt, I gottcha, lets just get you inside *walks up path towards the house*

Britain: *Steps outside onto the porch wiping his hands on his apron* ...drat it all, this haze is just getting worse...now you can't even see the front yard. *sighs and coughs* ...France, *yells inside* go close the windows, you know how sensitive Matthew is to this sort of air quality, I'm glad he's inside at least...

France: Already done Angleterre, *comes out as well wiping hands on apron* don't want to ruin our lunch with ze taste of smoke oui?

Canada: *notices he's in Alfred's arms and sees two figures on the porch through the haze* ..oh no *coughs* ...Papa *wheeze* and Father..they are out on the porch...

America: *looks up* looks that way *looks over shoulder* want me to put you down?

Canada: Ye..Yeh, otherwise *coughs* Father will go *wheeze* over protective...I..I can walk, it's ok...I think...

America: Alright dude if you're sure *gently lets Matt down*

Canada: *knees start to buckle but he grabs onto America's arm, eyes watering* j..just help me inside...*unsteadily walks closer and tries to smile at the adults* ..go..good afternoon..*wheeze*

America: *holds Canada by back of shirt hiding hand from adults*

Britain: Matthew, I thought you were inside...Alfred what were you thinking taking your brother out into this weather? You know he has a hard time breathing.

America: *eye brows lift* Hey now don't be blaming me! You two sent him out with something to drink

Britain: *glances to France who shakes his head* We did nothing of the sort.

France: I made some lemonaid or whatever you call it for when you came in... *looks to Matthew* not to be taken out to you

Canada: *blushes and wheezes* I...It just felt so..so good out here ....and well....*knees buckle and he falls to the ground wheezing loudly* my..my chest hurts...

America: Canada! *tries to hull back up*

France: *hurries down steps and kneels down*

Britain: alright that's it, inside. Both of you.

France: Oui and dis is what 'appens petite *helps Britian haul him up to his feet*

Britain: America, you as well *playfully yanks nantucket* I know you and Matthew feel what the other feels, so inside with you as well ...do you have him Francis?

America: *flinches* France: oui *picks up Matt and carries inside* Gah! Let go of me! I'm *cough* fine. I've got a bit more work to g-get done...owww! stop pullin!

Canada: *wraps arms around France's neck* ...no..no I want to stay here with Alfred *wheeze* I'm alright, Papa...I'm alright!

France: *gently pats Canada's head* Oui, je sais un petite chou, but right now you need to go inside... It iz no fun when its all smokey out oui? Besides you're brother will be in soon *looks up at Alfred* Right?

America:  *growls trying to pull away from Britain* well yeh b-but....

France: *lifts eye brows with a look of "do not argue"

Britain: Oh he's coming in. Right. Now. Move it.

America: *is dragged up stairs* GAHH B-BUT! *is shoved then kicked through door way by Britain*

Canada: Papa....my..my throat is scratchy...*wheezes* it..its hurting my chest...the..the coughs hurt...*shudders in France's arms*

France: *walks over and places Canada on couch in large living room then wraps blanket around Canada and pets head* Its alright, just lie here and I'll get you some water, oui? *strokes blonde hair*

Britain: Here, I will help you, tea my help his throat..

Canada: *watches France leaving rolling his eyes* ...*grabs Alfred's hand* ..*smiles coughing hoarsely* ..I ..I don't know whose worse....papa or father...

America: *chuckles kneeling down next to him* Better both than just one...There fighting at least gives us a break *hands Canada his bear* *Crash from in kitchen and shouts insure* *snickers* You see? Like clock work!

Canada: *tries to laugh but winds up just coughing* I..I guess so...but..I don't even drink tea...

America: *winks* just plop some maple surrip in it, it'll taste better *ruffels hair playfully causing it to go every which way*

Canada: mmm maple syrup.....*lays head back onto one of the couch pillow* ...*wheeze* ....why aren't you as bad off as I am? You were..were *coughs for several seconds, sweat running down his face* ..out there lo..longer than me..

America: *shrugs* I guess cause its my land... I'm just more used to it *looks around corner then back to Matt* *slowly gets up* You think you'll be ok?

Canada: *tries to act normal* of..of course. I'm just..sleepy..and ...its hard to breathe...I'.I'll be fine. Y..You got your lemonade *wheeze* that's all that matters...right? ...

America: *eyes lift in worry* y-you didn't have to do that you shouldn't have... *sighs and sits back down* *gently pets head* and no...That is not all that matters...*pets head* You matter too you know

Canada: *smiles weakly*...I..I also rema..remade the drink for you..Papa..fa..failed at it...

America: *smiles warmly* Thanks Canada *pats shoulder*

Canada: *eyes slowly close* ...*wheezes* ...h..hope they haven't...ki..killed one another ...ye..yet...*turns to his side, eyes clenching in pain*

America:  *looks over shoulder then back down... Eye brows lift* I'm more worried about you than them... They've been beating each other up for centuries, you ok?
you don't look good...C-Canada?

Canada: m' fine...re..really...*pants* ...I th..think.

France: *walks back in room with glass of water*

Canada: Papa! *tries to sit up but fails* ....t..thank you!!

France: *hands Canada glass of water* Dere you go, that should help... Now tell me, Pourquoi n'avez-vous aller à l'extérieur. Je vous ai dit pas à.
(Why did you go outside when I told you not to)

America: *blinks stupidly and looks to Canada*

Canada: *eyes lower as he sips from the cup* ..I wanted to ...to see America...you sent him outside....I just didn't think it was that bad outside...*chokes on the water*

Britain: Frog, I told you water wouldn't help. Here, try some camomille tea, it will sooth your throat and calm you down. *walks out of the kitchen with a tray that has two tea cups* you as well Alfred.

America: *pulls face* d-do I hafta?

Britain: you were outside against better judgement *glares at France* and i won't have you deteriorating like Matthew has.

America: I aint gunna "deteriorating" its just smoke! *coughs* I'm fine!

Canada: *whimpers and whispers taking the tea reluctantly taking a sip of it* ..don't fight please..*coughs* ..

America: *looks down at brother opens moth to argue... But can't*

France: Just drink the tea Alfred and humor him...

America: *snatched cup up* Fine fine I'll drink it *slumps down onto the arm of the sofa and sips on tea *

Canada: *lays back on his brothers lap feeling very sleepy* ...*coughs and wheezes, wincing as a dull nauseous pain starts to come from his stomach* ..*tea cup shakes in his hand as he moans, tea splashing over the top of the cup*

America: *looks down* Canada? you alright?

France: *looks to Alfred then to Matt*

America: *rubs stomach* Gah... Ouch... What the?

Canada: *nods trying to ignore his pain* ..of..of course *takes another sip of the tea letting out a sharp cry of pain* ..s..sorry...

America: *winces* Yaow! Guh...Dude...you are not ok...I even felt that!

Britain: what is wrong, America?

*France looks to America*

America: *looks up at them to Matt*...*Rubs stomach* m-my stomach. Ouch!...Gah it hurts like I've been shot *winces at small sharp jolts of pain*

France: *narrows eyes in thought* "Matthieu tell us truthfully.... *folds arms* How are you... Do not lie."

Canada: *blushes and tries to fall back further into Alfred's lap* ...Je vais bien, papa! vraiment!

France: *taps foot lifting eyebrow*

Canada: Alright Alright! j'ai mal au ventre .. mais ce n'est rien de mauvais (alright alright! my stomach hurts..but it's nothing bad)

France: *turns to England lifting eye brows in question* "His stomach hurts" he says

Britain: *tsks shaking his head* ....don't leave I'll get the thermoniter.....

Canada: No! Father! Really, it's not that bad! *tries to sit up to stop him but the stomach pain stops him and he collaspes back against his brother*

America: *pats head* Easy dude don't hurt yourself *shifts hand across head...* You feel clammy dude

France: *kneels back down and places hand on Canada's forehead* *scrunches face and rubs chin stubble in thought* Hmmmm

Canada: Papa, je vais bien, s'il vous plaît cesser de s'inquiéter. Je ne veux pas être un problème. *moans weakly shivering* (Papa, I'm fine, please stop worrying. I don't wish to be a bother. )

France: Être encore Mattheiu (Be still Mathew. Quiet now son) *pets head soothingly and smiles warmly* Vous n'êtes pas une peine (you are not a bother)

Canada: Alfred *begs weakly* you can't agree with them!!!

America: *blinks stupidly* How can I when I don't know what in the Sam hill he's saying! *gestures to France*

France: *France chuckles* Une telle mignon petit pigeon (such a cute little piegon) *pets Alfred's head*

Britain: *reappears* ..ah here it is!

Canada: *giggles* he called you a cute pigeon

America: *blinks stupidly* Pigeon? Wha?

France: *Waves hand indignatly*

Canada:  plus comme un pigeon stupides, papa *says with weak humor* (more like a stupid pigeon, papa)

France laughs: Oui Matthieu, qui est la farce fils (Yes Mathew that is teh joke son) *pats head chuckling and gently rubs knuckle on cheek*

Britain: *rolls eyes* alright speak the Queen's English please, now Matthew open your mouth

America: Hey now, I know the word "stupid" when I hear it!

Canada: *rolls eyes but opens his mouth weakly*

America: *smirks* Cheerio! Wot? Bullocks! Bolderdash! *says with a very bad accent*

Britain: *rolls eyes and yanks Nantucket hard with one hand and puts the thermometer in with the other* Close down, my boy. *turns to Alfred and yanks Nantucket again* you on the other hand are going to meet the guillotine!

America: GAHHHOOOWWW Ahhhh! France why did you invent that thing!!

France: *gestures to England* to keep him from making a mess... And to speed up production so to say...*looks over and smirks at America* Though, I don't think its your head 'e is speaking of oui? *glances to Nantucket*

America: *rolls eyes up ward then gulps* You would dare!!

Britain: Would I not? *reaches over and strokes Matthew's shoulder length blonde hair back* How has his breathing been since I left? Has the tea helped?

France: A little better, from what I've heard, but raspy still

America:  *looks over at Canada debating on whether or not to say something about his wheezing* *asks with eyes* *~Should I tell them? You ok?~*

Canada: *glances over to America* ~I don't know....I'm just sleepy - my throat and stomach hurts ~*

America:  *~I've noticed...can you breathe?~*

Canada: *shrugs* *~ yes?? it just hurts to do so....*inner voice gets weaker* ..so ..so tired ~* *eyes shut in real life and he slumps against Alfred the thermometer falling out of his mouth*

America:  Huh? Canada? *grabs thermometer and looks at it, it says 102.1* *eyes widen* Jesus Christ! Canada! *turns back to his brother tossing thermometer at adults, feels him gasping heavily against leg* Come on bro snap out of it!

Canada: *eyes open slowly* ..a..alfred....I don't feel good....*winces as his voice is hoarse from coughing so much*....*sweat running down the side of his face* Papa, je pense que je suis malade (papa, I think I'm sick)

France: *kneels down and places hand on forehead brushing America's hand away*...I was afraid of dis...*sighs and smiles despite the look of worry plastered on face* Don't worry mon mei, it will be alright... *Gently scoops Canada up* Lets get you to your room oui? And I'll fix you some of that maple tea you like?

Canada: *looks over at Alfred* ...but..but....*coughs and moans* Papa! America, don't leave me!

America: *stand up* I'm not going anywhere dude

France: You're frere is not going anywhere. He's coming too... *looks to Britain and Alfred*

America: *nods* right

Britain: *stands up yanking America to his feet* we're all coming, do not worry.

America:  *rubs arm* I said I was coming

*All head up to Matt's room...About an hour passes... Matt and Alfred sit on the large bed, listening to the radio while Alfred plays his gameboy*

~ And in other news, raging forest fires spread across the area...Citizens are advised to seek shelter and those who are in hazard eras are to evacuate~

Canada: *sits up knocking the compress off his forehead, wavering unsteadily* ..ohhhh *holds head in hands* ...we're ...we're not in that area ...are we? *starts to slightly panic*

America: *looks up from game boy and looks out window...Haze has gotten thicker* Nah! we're fine...*coughs and wipes forehead* D-don't worry *secretly is growing a bit concerned*

Canada: H..How can I not worry? *starts hacking a bit of blood dripping to his hand*...Oh god..

America:  *eyes lift and face contorts* Oh my God!! MATT *scoots closer inspecting him and the blood dripping on sheets* g-gross! Dude! What's happening to you!

Canada: I..I don't know...*finding it hard to breathe* ...Al..Alfred this isn't good ....this ...this is bad...*eyes close briefly and he collapses back to the pillows panting and out of breath, clearly to weak to be sitting up or moving*

America: *moans nervously* M-Matt? *gingerly places hand on forehead*
*softly* D-dude...*gulps then starts to gently rub his head* shhhh easy Matt easy
you're going to be alright, just relax, just breathe *tries to hide fear* *winks* One step ahead of me as always bro *pats head* You wait here now, don't run off *says lightly trying to keep mood cheerful...As soon as he is out the door he sprints down hall*
Cast:
Canada: Robin Gurl
America: Miles
Britain: Robin Gurl
France: Miles

OMG. XD yeh this is the insanity that we've been working on for almost a month. There are four HUGE parts together and inside those are little parts. So this is the first part: Fire. Fire is 45 pages long when it's together but because of length issues was cut up until 4 smaller bits.

Fire:
Part 1 - You are here
Part 2 - [link]
Part 3 -[link]
Part 4 - [link]

We are aware that not everyone is in full character - so Canada is a bit OOC to some people. But to :iconweissvulf: and I ;) he's perfect. lol. And to answer questions a head of time: The torture only get's worse. I will tell you this much: being out in the fire destroyed Canada's voice and lungs, he's stuck in the hospital for over 100 pages. But that's where insanity takes over and Alfred once again becomes the greatest older brother (by 2 minutes) evah.. xDDD

THERE ARE NO PAIRINGS. :iconweissvulf: isn't a fan of yaoi. She can joke about it and stuff but seriously not into it. So this was meant to be more of a family fic.

**HOWEVER** as a fan of yaoi myself: I can see USUK and FRANADA in it...as well as *if you squint* FrUk. :3 So enjoy my pretties. I think there might be some MapleTea in the next installment.

We'd love comments on it because we've been nervous to post this since it is our baby. And don't worry they are countries, they can't die ...lol which is why I think we like doing hurt/comfort with them all the time...and we didn't mean to hurt Canada on purpose *shrug* ...we started out with both the twins and then something about hurt!canada and sick!canada caught our eyes and BOOM out popped this entire series. o.O

Disclaimer: We own nothing but the idea. xD
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Kitten5432's avatar
why you torture my favorite nation! Awesome story btw (I bet America was playing Pokemon on that gameboy)